Presentation Slide Critique — illustrative example

INPUT
Slide has a 90-word paragraph, an unlabeled chart and a title reading Results.

RESULT
Replace the title with the supported takeaway, label chart axes and units, and reduce the paragraph to the evidence needed for that takeaway.
Review the slide at presentation size before adjusting decoration.

REVIEW
A slide critique should evaluate message hierarchy, readability and evidence. Separate observable design issues from preferences, and prioritize changes that help the audience understand the point.

This is a teaching example, not a live execution record.